Q. some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. others think that this information should be protected. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A. It is true that criminals' personal information must be concealed to the public. However, there is a more convincing argument that the criminals' personal information can should (should/must와 can은 꽤 차이가 큽니다.) be opened to the public for our safety.
On the one hand, it is still important to protect the criminals' private information as it might victimize innocent people. As violent criminals are human beings in one country as well. So, they also have a reason to be protected. It is fair to deal with them like the general public other average people. Furthermore, some criminals might feel guilty in themselves which they decided not to be aggressive again. For instance, in a recent article criminal's information was opened for citizen's safety and their families who are innocent were suffering about this case. (이 자체는 맞는 말인데, 문제는 이 내용이 앞과 전혀 연결이 되지 않는다는 점입니다. 앞에서는 쭉~범죄자 얘기를 하다가 갑자기 가족 얘기를 for instance 아래 적는 건 적절하지 않아요.)
Nonetheless, if the criminals' personal information is not publicized, then they might harm people again. Protecting protecting citizens is more considerable than concealing criminals' personal information. To avoid criminals, people need to know their data and people also have a right to know as a citizen. In fact, currently, people are making a petition to publicize criminals' information. As you can see it can be seen (2인칭은 구어에 속하기 때문에 그냥 쓰지 않는다고 보시면 됩니다.), many people are feeling worried about the criminal and people are afraid of living their life freely. In, in case they might get into small or big troubles.
To sum up, It it is evident that protecting criminals' private information is significant but it is inevitable that keeping people away from the criminals by publicizing their information is more important in this case.
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