There is less social contact between young and old. What are the reasons? What measures can be taken?
In modern society, the social
relationship between young people and old people is very rare. This is because they
apparently have there apparently is a generation gap and lack of communication with each other. To tackle
this problem, I personally would suggest that providing educational classes to
know other generation is certainly necessary.
To begin with, it is apparent
that there is a difficulty to understand people of the other generation. For the young, they tend
to think that elderlies are stubborn and conservative while old people would
feel that young people are too liberal and immature unmatured. The reason why they have a
stereotype towards the other generation is because of great influence by mass media.
For some reason, media have been inclining to promote generation gap to get the
power on political and societal issues. This definitely has affected to the two
generation to have a biased and wrong mindset towards each other. Another reason
is that they do not have opportunities to share their ideas or thoughts even with
their family members or neighbors. If the society ignore this issue, it would
affect to future generation and society in a negative way.
To solve this problem, the collective
effort should be needed by the governments and organizations. It is an inevitable truth that
old people are not up-to-date on 등등 recent information and technologies. Due to this fact the fact
that, old people certainely have difficulties to communicate with young people. However, by By providing
educational classes for old generation, it can possibly mitigates the problems
little by little. Moreover, the government should provide young people to participate in the social gathering or classes with old people. This is not only learning new knowledge
but also making social relationships to get better know each other better.
In conclusion, although it is true that the relationship between young and old has been rusty, it is time to change the tendency for the future generation by mingling and learning things together.
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