You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about
your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
- correct the information in the article
- explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know some critical error
of information that an article which introduced about my town. It is a very
important issue for our town, so you should rectify this problem.
As you know, my town has a very beautiful
lake. But recently, the lake was polluted by some factory wastes were polluted the lake. Then our town’s
community organization suggested to that block the lake for a while for to conservation purposes.
Therefore, visitors would not be able to join the lake’ scenery. That restriction
would be constant at least 6 months.
Therefore, the ‘Festival of Cherry blossom’
would be not able to be held on this year. That is because that range of festival include
whole lake’s area. The Festival of Cherry blossom is one of the most famous festival in our country, so
many tourists make plan to visit. Besides, your article especially gives
information about that festival. (조금 더 명확히 해주셔야 합니다. 이게 올해에 열릴 것이라고 기사에 써있었다는 등의 내용을 추가해보세요!) I do not want to visitors who are visit our
town sorely disappointed.
I hope you will act rapidly to correct
wrong information and announce that on your website.
I look forward to hearing good news from
you.
Yours faithfully,
Euna (이러한 공적인 목적의 글에서는 성도 같이 넣어주시면 됩니다.)
-독학중입니다.
-라이팅 목표점수:최소4
-시험날짜:10월 24일
-글 작성 소요 시간:35분/188자/ 토픽 단어장 참고.
총평: (6/6/6/5) 6.0
시간 때문에 6.0은 안 나오겠지만 4는 당연히 넘깁니다. 일단, 1차적으로 10월 초까지 그 어떤 글을 쓰든 task1은 30분대에, task2는 50분대에 쓸 수 있게 연습해보세요! 그리고 이게 완료되면 그 이후에 20분, 40분으로 줄이시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)