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As the world is getting globalised, many universities are providing an opportunities
that for students can to study on abroad. And (문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) Many many students also want to participate in extracurricular Extracurricular system to study on other countries because they can get many advantages. (<-여기까지는 주어진 현상이고, 이제 이에 대해 da님께서 어떻게 생각하시는지를 적어주셔야겠죠.)
First, students can meet foreigners (무엇을 통해 그렇게 할 수 있는지를 적어주셔야 합니다. 이 경우 교환학생 활동이 해당되고요.). As the world is getting globalised, people need to speak English, at least (영어보다는 외국어라고 하는 게 맞습니다.). If students meet foreigners, they can learn other languages quickly and experience various customs. It make helps students connect to the world and they broaden their views and minds.
Second, They students (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 서술되어서는 안 됩니다.) can take valuable skills on other countries. For example, In in the field of fashion, Paris is the most famous in the world because there are many famous fashion show s. Many Korean students who want to become a model go to a Paris to experience the most working environment and their professionality. In addition, Learning learning valuable skills on the famous country of the field is good for a student's career.
As above the advantages, These experiences will be helpful when students get a job. Many companies prefer applicants who have multiple experiences and speak other languages since they tend to collaborate with foreign companies . So students who have exchange program are easier than those who don't (세 개의 근거를 짧게 작성하는 것보다는, 두 개의 근거에 대한 상세한 설명을 하는 쪽으로 작성해주시는 게 좋습니다.)
For These Reasons these reasons, I recommend that students to participate in an are encouraged exchange program. It will be helpful in that students can develop their ability and improve their future.
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