Your Answer ▼ Some people assert that advertisements has an effect affect to vital decisions about folk's (라이팅에서 절대로 절대로 쓰실 일 없습니다. 저 밑에도 마찬가지입니다.) purchasing. Other people argue that advertisements do not persuade people's mind at buying anymore. I support the farmer opinion. This essay will offer both of opinions and my own view.
There is a view that folk not concentrate to advertising when they purchase products. That is because people who see it through media such as TV, computer and smart phone already have aware of its mechanism how it work. In other words, as the public has been exposed plenty of it, they have known that advertisements misleads consumers with a sales gimmick. As a result, they feel tired from it.
On the other hand, there is a opinion that advertises effectively provide people to buy products. In the modern society, There there are various types of way for advertising such as subway, bus, YouTube, SNS. Advertisers take advantage of these by exposing skillfully to people who do not recognize a advertisement everywhere.(40분) In other words, more and more media develops, quality of advertising also increase. For instance, a person who runs YouTube uploads a video about a cosmetic to subscribers by showing how it is used. Then, people who watched the video could be interested in it and eager to have it, even though they do not need. (여기서 엔터는 따로 치지 않습니다.) That is why I think advertising has a huge effect to the public until now.
In conclusion, although advertising does not affect to the public's purchase successfully. I believe that advertising has been impacting choices of people about buying.(1시간 4분)
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