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There are many arguments in modern society, in which the internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로, 예외적인경우를 제외하고는 대문자 시작입니다. 다른데에도 싹 다 바꿔주세요!) will never replace traditional course books in schools, while many students tend to think that they can replace all old-style books with e-books (e로 해도 되고 E로 하셔도 됩니다. 대신 뭐 하나 골랐으면 그걸 글 내내 유지할 수 있어야 해요.). I insist that the internet course books can replace traditional books in the future. This essay will discuss the topic by using examples to support arguments and demonstrate points. Online books can replace all traditional books used in schools because E-books offer a better quality of information for students. Not only providing reliable information but also E-books have many updated materials that can help students learning. (낫온리벗올소의 경우 학생들이 쉽게 접근해서 자주 쓰곤 합니다. 그러나 쓰는 족족 다 틀리는 표현 중 하나에요. 봉인하시는 게 낫습니다.) For example, many educators have pointed out that traditional books are not suitable for students’ study because some books include outdated information that students cannot use. For this reason, educators tend to choose online books to give reliable educational materials to students. Therefore, it seems apparent that computer or other devices cannot replace paper books entirely in the future. > Therefore, it seems apparent that computers or other devices cannot replace paper books entirely in the future. E-books give physical freedom to people; therefore, all students do not need to carry heavy books every day to their school >단어 학교라서… by distressing the situation. Students only need to take a single one tablet included all information they need. For instance, many students who always carry major books to their school have experienced physical hardship. Even some students appealed to back pain. Hence, replacing all traditional books with online books is more beneficial in modern society. (없는게좋겠죠?) In conclusion, even though the topic is controversial, the benefits of e-books outweigh the disadvantagesseem outweighed than course books. Therefore, I highly assert that electronic books can replace paper-based books in educational institutions. > 중복 단어를 피하기위해서.. 동어반복 신경쓰지 마세요! Traditional course book 너무 많이썼어
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