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It
is true that (여기의 경우 그냥 that만 반복하는 거라, 사실 낭비입니다.) some people believe that young people still need to live with
their parents while they study in college. However, I think it is not good for
them and they should would rather choose to live apart from their family house for
several reasons.
While
I admit parents can make you (2인칭은 어느정도 구어에 해당하기 때문에, 따로 쓰지 않는다고 보시면 됩니다. 다른데에도 다 바꿔주세요!) comfort and feel loved, they sometimes can annoy
you with some silly reasons. However by living alone, college students could get
more time to spend on studying because there would be no one disturbing them. By
focusing on studying for their major, they could get higher marks on exams, and
that will lead them to a better opportunity to get a job. As we all know, these
days getting a decent job is a huge concern for young students.
Secondly,
it (이게 뭔지에 대해 다시 한번 상기시켜주셔야 합니다.) would be the first step for a college student to become an independent adult.
Most children do not recognize how many things they should do to keep their
home tidy and how much the house they are living in could costs them. However,
by living on their own, they would be able to learn all the things by going
through them, including house chores such as doing laundry, recycling, and
paying for rent. I personally believe that it will help them to become responsible
adults.
In
conclusion, although there could be many advantages of living with parents, I
do not agree with the opinion that it is better for college students because I think the benefits
of independent life outweigh them. |