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The given bar charts provide data about people who buy and drink a different types of beverage in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart of Australia.
Overall, it is clearly seen that there are three categories. In principle, went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks are was the highest option, bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks are was second, and bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks are was the third. ("Adelaide 제외하고" 이러한 경향을 보인다고 정확하게 써주세요.)
The first option of the survey depicts the percentage of city residents that went to a cafe for coffee for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks. In Sydney, about 61% of city residents people went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks about 61% of city residents. In Brisbane, roughly 55.4% of citizens went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks roughly 55.4%. The lowest is Adelaide that shows just under 50% of city residents. In Hobart, approximately 62.6% of people went to a cafe for coffee of tea in last 4 weeks approximately 62.6%. The highest is Melbourne that shows around 63.3%. (각 도시의 수치만을 나열해주시는 것보다 수치 간의 비교와 대조 표현이 추가되는 서술이 필요합니다.)
The second category is bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks. Brisbane has less than 53%.(문장을 늘려서 써주세요. less than 53% of residents in Brisbane bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks. 이런 식으로요!) Other two cities that have almost the same number are Adelaide, with 49.8%, and Melbourne, with 48.3%. The lowest is about 45.5% of Sydney and the highest number is about 54.1% of Hobart.
The last option is bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In Sydney is shows the highest bar, at about 43.7%. And(문장을 and, so, but 으로 시작하는 것을 피해주세요. 혹은 지금 이 부분은 앞 문장과 연결해서 그대로 써주셔도 괜찮습니다. 문장 나누지 마시구요! )has almost the same amount as Melbourne which is 42.2%. Brisbane and Adelaide have nearly same amount, 34.2% and 34.4%. Next, Hobart has about 38.6%.
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