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Nowadays,the debate about one of the most significant school subjects have been has increased. Some people think that History is the most necessary subject of fall(? all을 써주시려고 했던 것 맞나요?) school subjects. One the other hand, there are people who argue that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than the other school subjects. I agree with the latter. It cannot be neglected that History gives the life's significance(significant life lessons to people. 정도로 써주시면 될 것 같습니다.). To explain, when you learn about history that contains the course of making the today's society, you might know the fact that ancestors devoted their body and life for saving your country, fighting hardly with people who attacked your country for destructing your country. Then, students get a motivation that lead a to live more meaningful and active life. There is a maxim in Korea ; the person who don't do not know history wouldn't would not(축약어는 풀어서 써주세요) get the future. That means history is how important for students to lead their life successful in the future. Nevertheless, the fact remains that learning subjects such as Science and Technology gives(주어가 learning에 걸리기 때문에 s를 붙여줬습니다.) the students more helps that make those chances to become more competent people. To be specific, nowadays, the firms and government have required(require 보다는 prefer동사를 써주시는 것이 더 나을 것 같아요) the person that to have scientific knowledge and technology because the industry have grown, concentraing the field of science and technology. because of the 4th industrial revolution. Therefore, getting the knowledge of science and extending the capacity for scientific technology would help students to easily get the better job. In conclusion, the both of views are valid, but I agree with the fact that the subjects such as technology and science is the best subject in helping student easily get an occupation. |