■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems? |
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Your Answer ▼
Some people believe that a new language have to be invented by people for international interaction. There are both merits and demerits of making new language, and I think that the merits are more significant than its disadvantages. To begin with, there are several positive aspects to this view. First of all, an advent of new languages by people’s invention is helpful for worldwide communication through utilizing this development. If more and more people make a new language and use that words, it can alleviate linguistic and cultural barriers between many different countries. In addition, these invention and effort to utilize new language give some opportunity for modern people to international interaction. Under a circumstance, making a language which is not have been utilized, is useful to nation’s combine easily. Nevertheless, not all aspects are beneficial to this trend. Firstly, some people could be difficult to adapt and learn by advent of new words. If most people using new language in modern society, sadly though, many people will feel more gap between who do not know new language. To be specific, especially, older people in our society are in danger of losing their ways of communication than even before. This tendency might be difficult for people’s regular international interaction. In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks, and I believe that advent of new language is more beneficial. To international communication, this invention will be more used by many people in the world.
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
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새로운 언어를 발명하는 것의 장점이 더 많다고 언급해주셨으면 글 전체를 통틀어 그와 관련된 장점만을 언급해주시는 것이 글쓴이의 의견을 극대화시키는데 더 도움이 됩니다. 지금처럼 장점과 단점을 동시에 언급해주시면 글쓴이의 의견이 모호해지는 효과가 있어 높은 점수를 얻는데 어려움이 있습니다. 수고하셨습니다.