■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? |
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In terms of the house, this it is one of the most important facilities for human life. People want to get the safety and stability from the house. Although some people make their home by renting for a long time, I would like to say that owing house is more beneficial because of the right and financial reason. In some countries, the right of whom rent a house is insured for a long time. If people have found and made a renting contract once, they can stay in that place as long as they want, and it is insured legally. Moreover, if the house price is stable due to the enough supply or less popularity, owing a house is not essential for their life. People do not need to be hurried to buy their own house because of the belief that they can buy the house whenever they want. But in the majority of countries, the right of people who rent a house is not insured for a long time. For example, in South Korea, it is only 2 years duration, so people have to find the new place to stay for every 2 years unless they could recontract with the house owner they are staying. It very threatens the safety and the stability of life, so that people are encouraged to get their own house as young as they are. Additionally, in most cases, the house price is unstable, so that people are afraid to be less likely to find new house suitable for their budget. If people can get their own house, the anxiety of financial statement will be disappear. For the reasons mentioned above, I would argue that the benefits of owing the house are overweigh its drawbacks because people can make their life more stable and get rid of the worries about budget.
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
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