■ Direction· Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. give your own opinion.
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Your Answer ▼
Some assert that it is useful to divide information as much as possible in scientific study, business and academic world, (문장을 끊어주세요) nevertheless, others claim that some information should not be shared freely as it is too crucial or too valuable. Both views will be discussed, and I believe that sharing information is more beneficial. Other people can easily get information which some people have gained through their time and effort, but is not appropriate. Some information started going through long-term research, and this process needed to spend much more time and money. Moreover, some people try to gain information frequently for their profit, and sometimes they abuse that. Obtaining various information through the diverse media is also not their own knowledge and data. Therefore, sadly though, these tendencies are in danger of being distorted and abusing the original information. For instance, a research paper in which the author studied biology over a decade spread SNS in 2015. Some people who are related to this major can use this, in addition, new theories were abused frequently by combining information. As a result of this situation, the author could not receive any reward eventually and expressed his mind. However, I disagree with this idea because it is more beneficial than negative aspects by dividing some information. Through the interaction of sharing various categories of information which cannot experience themselves directly, the general public can broaden their horizon or gain what people need. For example, people who do not know information and techniques about their job or life-goal, such as how to become a teacher, can acquire several ways or knowledge to reach their goals in books or from the internet. Plus, sharing data gives people more opportunities to learn and develop their weaknesses from their own perspective, and it can help more and more people with less effort than ever before. Under such a circumstance, these aspects are helpful to improve the quality of their life, and various information could be actively utilized to live effectively. In conclusion, although there are some negative aspects in this theme, it is my opinion that sharing information has become a great way to acquire and provide what information people want/need.
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채점 기준 | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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글에서 정보를 공유하는 것을 dividing한다고 표현해주셨는데 이 경우 sharing 이라는 단어가 좀 더 적절할 수 있습니다. 또한 중간중간 글쓴이가 무엇을 전달하고자 하는 것인지 모호한 문장들이 있었는데 이 부분의 경우 좀 더 문장의 의미를 명확히 할 수 있도록 해 주세요. 수고하셨습니다.