The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004
The table illustrates statistical data when it comes to the figure for the amount of oil generated in four countries per day over the research years: between 2000 and 2004 with interval of a year. These figures are measured in barrels per day.
As an overall trend, Congo showed the highest amount of oil production among all countries ranging from approximately 200,000 to 280,000 (Overview를 작성할 때에는 구체적인 수치를 따로 넣지 않습니다.) during the given period, whereas the lowest figure in each year can be discovered in Chad. Also, what stands out from the figure for Congo is that it is the only country where the amount of produced oil gradually went down, while the opposite was true for other countries.
Beginning with the figure from 2000, Congo showed the highest figure (바로 앞에 같은 표현이 쓰였으므로 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다. 데이님 정도 실력이면 충분히 대체가 가능할 거에요.), constituting roughly 280,000 barrels (이와 같이, 단위는 싹 다 넣어주셔야 합니다.) and followed by Nigeria, Somalia and Chad which accounts for 205,000, 5,000 and zero respectively. However, this trend could not be sustained and the amount of generated oil in Nigeria surpassed the that in Congo in 2004. In addition, one particularly interesting point highlighted by the figure in 2004 is that Chad experienced a considerable rise in oil production and became the same with the figure for Somalia at 50,000.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
이번 글도 잘 써주셨습니다. 단위가 생략되지 않도록 주의해주시고, figure가 너무 자주 반복되는 감이 있기 때문에 꼭 대체가 필요하지만, 전반적으로는 좋은 점수를 얻어가실 수 있을 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)