안녕하세요, 첨삭 부탁드리고자 글남깁니다.
옛날 유형인지 80분에 15분을 주더라구요. 그래서 20분에 150자로 생각하고 글을 썼습니다.
목표점수는 7점이고, 12월 중으로 시험을 보려고 합니다.
169자이고 15분 걸렸습니다.
감사합니다.
To Jay,
I have heard about your situation a few hours ago. I am really sorry to hear that. It rained heavily yesterday, there was a massive blackout in the area we live. I heard that you did not meet the due hour to submit your assignment, due to yesterday's heavy rain in our area.
As you know, I already have a similar experience to the one that you had. About three months ago, I was doing my assignment in the library at the school. I was almost done with it and the power was out suddenly without any reasons. I overdued my assignment and mine was not accepted initially. So I tried to contact to the professor and explained why I was not able to meet the due date. Eventually, my assignment was accepted and I got a good score.
I think you should contact the professor and explain what happened yesterday. Fortunately, you take the a same course that I did had, so the professor would understand your situation. I hope your assignment to get accepted. Good luck!
Sincerely, (친구한테는 이런 표현 쓰지 않습니다.)
Ian Jeong
총평: (7/7/7/6) 7.0
기본적으로 영어 자체는 잘 하시는 편이며, 제너럴 치르시기 때문에 task1에서 발목 잡힐 일도 없을 겁니다. 고로 실전 적응만 잘 해주시면 7.0 정도는 충분히 가능할 거에요. 그렇다고 해서 자만해서는 안 되고, 12월까지 모범답안 분석+어휘 공부+문법 공부는 꼭 해주세요! 이게 뼈가 되고 살이 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)