The chart shows the figure for full-time
education and part-time education in further education in both genders. The
period is from 1970 to 1990.
Focusing on the Female’s figure, the number
of both full-time education and part-time education participants is increasing
gradually. It was a little bit less than 800 thousand in 1970. However, it grew
up to more than 1000 thousand in 1990. Similarly, the figure for full-time
education also peaked at the end of the period with the number of approximately
200 thousand.
The growth of male’s full-time education
figure was relatively less sharp than the female’s. Interesting thing is that the
figure for part-time education is the only figure that is decreasing on this
whole chart. The trend of the figure of part-time education in male differs
with the others. It dropped rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and slightly grew from 1980
to 1990.
As a whole, the figures are all increasing
except male’s part-time education figure from 1970 to 1980. Also, the number of
part-time education is much bigger than full-time education.
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