There are many travelers who destroy historical
features during their the trip and it is becoming harder to protect them. Although
this is highly a serious matter in all around the world, it can be prevented by having
many signs to alert the tourists.
This unfortunate situation happens for
various reasons. However, probably the most crucial reason (바로 앞에 쓰인 표현이므로 가급적이면 대체해주세요!) can be that the travelers
do not know the importance of the places. Since they are foreigners and not
familiar with the culture of the country they travel, many historical features
can be mistaken as normal figures such as common buildings and bridges to them.
For example, when Americans visit Korea, they tend to mistake the historical monument
on a mountain as a big rock.
Even though this is quite a serious problem,
it can be solved with some efforts and protect the historical places. By having
alert signs around the historical places with diverse languages, the foreigners
can know that the place is significant and has to be preserved. Sometimes,
simple acknowledging it acknowledgement can make a big difference. In addition, there can be an
explanation of the place about why it is important historically can be provided. The
explanation can not only help tourists to notice the place’s significance but also
advertise and promote the historical meaning of the place, which can lead to
further cautiousness of other tourists who have seen the explanation.
In conclusion, there are a lot of damage to
many historical places that are caused by tourists and it gets harder to keep
it perfect. However, we can reduce the damage by making alert signs and explaining
the historical meaning of the place to the world.
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