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There are many people who give advice and
guide to children for their future. In some countries, children receive Children were received advice that they you can
achieve anything if they you try hard and do their your best. In my opinion, I think this
message can give them advantage or disadvantage depends on their thinking depending on their mindset and in this essay I will give advantages and disadvantage of this statement.
Most of people give this message to
children, because they think it is good for children and gives motivation for
their life. I was also one of the children who heard this message when I was
young. At that time, I believed that I can get whatever I want if I do my best
and give my effort to studying. Therefore, I try tried my best and had a pride have proud that I
will achieve what I want in the future, because I try hard. Many children
receive motivation and power by this advice.
Although it gives me motivation, I become
realistic person. There are many people, troubles, and reasons that I could get
what I want. Such as money, knowledge, talent etc., most of children blocked
their future because of theses reason. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) For me, I tried to do my best because I
believe that advice, however, I was frustrated in the reality as I grow up.
Like me, people can be discouraged by this advice.
This advice can offer motivation to children try hard
for achieve something that they want, when they were young and the time that
they do not know the reality. As children getting older, they will realize the
reality and this advice was for children. To the conclusion, I believe this
advice is not good for children in the long run. As I experienced. (얘는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
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