This diagram represents how a cicada transforms from eggs to an imago.
Overall, it (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰여서는 안 됩니다.) goes through three stages, eggs, nymph, and cicada. This cycle happens near a tree or inside a tree, which takes several months to several years. The cycle from eggs to imago repeats within minimum 2 to 3 years to a maximum of 17 to 18 years.
Looking at
the diagram more closely, eggs first exist in branches of a tree (갑자기 뿅하고 생겨난 건 아니기 때문에 '낳는' 것부터 시작해주셔야 합니다.). However,
after 2 to 7 months, place where it eggs grow changes. When it comes to nymph, it lives
underground or in tunnels near tree roots. This is a time consuming step, since
it takes 2 to 17 years to be done. After that period, it finally gets out of the
ground and starts to take off its skin layer, which takes 20 to 150 minutes. As
this process ends, a cicada has the shape of an adult we commonly recognize. Later, when
it produces eggs, this cycle restarts from the first step.
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