Many automobile manufacturers created self-driving systems for their vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of releasing cars with these systems.
Every passing day, the technology is continuously developing and numerous high-tech items tare introduced to the public. Recently, self-driving cars have been released and attracted many people’s attention. Simultaneously, it has brought a controversy since it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, since the self-driving car is equipped with the well-organized computer system, it controls the driving instead of a driver. Sometimes human beings make mistake. Once they feel weary, it can affect them while driving. In fact, many car accidents are happened due to sleepy drivers. However, by driving a self-driving car, it can prevent the aforementioned problems. Moreover, drivers who have anxiety about driving can be free from the stress since the car drives for them.
Nevertheless, even though a self-driving car seems luxury and perfect, several disadvantages of self-driving system deter people from buying the car. First of all, there is a security problem since this system is based on the computer. Many computerized machines have a high risk of being hacked and bring systemical malfunction. Moreover, a data spill of driver’s information could happen once it is hacked. Furthermore, the price of self-driving cars are extremely expensive and it is not affordable for many people. Meanwhile, there are a wide arrange of cars at a reasonable price with many options.
To sum up, it is true that the emergence of a self-driving car has brought controversy. In a positive perspective, it can drive automatically so that drivers can relax and not worrying about their physical condition. However, it also has disadvantages related to security problems and an exorbitant price.
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아, self-driving 이 너무 자주 나온 것 같아서 슬펐지만,,뭔가 대체 하기 애매해서 그냥 두었어요 ㅠㅠ