The map illustrates how Queen Mary Hospital developed throughout the years: 1960, 1980, and 2000.
(여기에 Overview를 넣어주셔야 합니다. 단, 내용 자체는 저 맨 밑에 지워진 걸 표현만 살짝 바꿔서 그냥 그대로 올려주셔도 무방해요.)
In 1960, the hospital was first constructed alongside the main road. There was a shopping centre right next to it. Behind the hospital, there was a parking lot, while the area behind the shopping centre was the farm land (표가 액박이라 확답을 드리지는 못하겠지만, 아마 붙여쓰셔야 할 겁니다.).
By 1980, the shopping centre was converted to a cancer centre and a the pharmacy. The farmland also became the part of the hospital. It was changed into a nursing school.
In 2000, the cancer centre drastically expanded to take all the space which was previously a nursing school. The car park diminished its it’s size in order to make space for the nursing school.
During this period, the position and size of the main building remained the same. However, Queen Mary Hospital extended the size by adding pharmacy, nursing school, and cancer centre.
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