Not as many young people living in rural areas have access to a university education. Some say that universities should make attendance easier for people from rural areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In my opinion, i I do not think that universities should make attendance easier for people from rural areas. First of all, I do not thinkt that there is the gap of the education environment between cities and rural areas. In the past, there was the gap as many people gathered in cities so that a good education environment was formed. However, nowadays, people live not only in cities but also in rural areas. So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.), also there is a good education environment in rural areas. Then, i As for this, I want to show an example in Korea.
If there is no good education environment in rural areas, people in there could learn through the media system. Korea has a great meia education system called EBS, so people in rural areas could learn the same classes that people in cities learn.
Second, people are going to take the same test. And people enter universities throught the grades from the test. People in both rural areas and cities study the same materials and take the same test. Sos i So I do not think that it is fair to make attendance easier for people from rural areas. As both of people learn the same materials and take the same test. everyone, everyone should be given the equal opportunities.
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