Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. However, some people do not believe that the government can solve environmental problems, What are the reason and the solution?
With an ever concern about reducing global environmental damage, some individuals have opined that this problem problems cannot be solved by the government. This essay will present the reason why a proportion of the population think that the government could not solve this issue and the solution to resolve this phenomenon.
To begin with, concerns about economy and industries coherently illustrates the matter pertaining to this theme. In the capitalism in which the development of economy is the most important virtue, people have relished the economic affluence so far. No matter how much damage is damages caused by industries and companies, this interest on economy has have made the government implement many policies to encourage economy, not reduce global environmental damages. These government policies have ascertained individual's focus on improving their economic situation, not protecting the environment. Such a priority of government and individuals has resulted in ignoring the ignorance of the fundamental role of the government to protect the environment by cooperating other nations or global organizations. Thus, economic perspectives to the environmental issue make people believe that the government could not cope with these agendas by itself.
In spite of the reason mentioned above, I believe that social movements for protecting environments can solve this problems. In a modern society, the public have enough knowledge and information to make a request to the government to implement some policies for preserving the nature. With these knowledge, the public can ask the government to impose more taxes on industries and companies who have responsibility on the environmental damages. In addition, the general public can suggest the government to spend more budget to deal with environmental issues by using the increased taxes, which will be the optimum strategy to bring the global cooperation for alleviating environmental damages. Therefore, social movements by individuals is the answer to make the government initiate policies to cope with this issue.
In conclusion, it seems that government would not solve this issue (이게 뭔지에 대해 작성해주셔야 합니다.) at first glance. Nevertheless, I believe that social movements by the public will help the government make an effort to resolve this problem.
총평: 일단 지금 논제를 만든 사람이 논제의 워딩에 있어 그렇게 신경쓴 편은 아니라, 질이 그렇게 좋지는 못합니다. 고로 저도 따로 점수를 넣거나 내용상 깊게 봐드리지는 않았고 주로 표현 쪽만 살짝 건드렸습니다. 대신, 지금 표현상의 문제가 그렇게 많지는 않다는 점에서 6.5는 충분히 받으실 겁니다.
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