The pie chart depicts the information that tourists visited the of visits made by tourists in four places in Britain in 1999. In overall Overall (이건 그냥 외우세요!), the most of part included museum & galleries and theme parks made the most part of the survey. Them parks were divided into the details. (여기의 경우 철자에 주의해주셔야 하며,지금 문장은 표에 대한 소개를 할 때 들어가야 합니다. 즉, Overview 이전에 나와야 해요.)
Turning to the details, the 38% of visitors chose to visit tourist attraction which was theme parks. This was followed by museums and galleries, accounting for 37%. and historic house & monuments occupied a the marginal part which constituted 16%. The smallest figure was wildlife parks & zoos. This part was picked by only 9% tourists.
In addition, visitors who went to theme parks answered four types. The To take a more specific look at the visitors who went to theme parks, part of Blackpool pleasure beach (얘까지 해서 하나의 고유명사입니다.) was chosen by about a half of the total tourist, making up 47%. The figures of Atton towers and Pleasureland, Southport were similar and showed 17% and 18% respectively. 10% of those who visited theme parks went Chessington world of adbentures (여기도 얘까지 고유명사이며, 또한 철자 문제 역시 보이네요.) and Legand, Windsor each.
총평: (7/6/6/6) 6.5
표가 쉬운 편이라 그나마 TA에서 점수는 벌어갔지만, 최근 들어 잘 써주시던 글들에 비해 이번 글들은 표현상 조금 아쉬웠네요. 일단 무엇보다 철자 오류가 나서는 안 됩니다. 특히 지금처럼 표에 대놓고 항목의 철자를 알려주는데 틀릴 경우 곤란해지므로 주의해주세요~대소문자 역시 잘 체크해주셔야 합니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)