Q. The charts above give information on the ages of people when they got married in one country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide a comparison of marriage age trends among men and women in 1996 and 2008 in a certain country. The data is divided into six age groups, ranging from 16-19 to 40-44.
Overall, the age that both genders got married was higher in 2008, while women tended to marry at a younger age than men.
In 1996, 1 per cent of women got married between the ages of 16 and 19, while in 2008 this figure was about three times lower. Interestingly, no men in this age group go married in both years. The most common age for females to get married was from 25 to 29 years of ages, at around 11.5 per cent in 1996 and 2008.
In terms of male's age at marriage, the groups of 25-29 and 30-34 were equally the most common age (앞에 쓰인 표현이라 일부러 생략했습니다.), at about 9 per cent in 1996. However, by 2006, the age group of 25 and 29 by males had fallen to 8 per cent, while 11 per cent of men had increased in the age group of 30 and 34 (여기는 아마 높은 확률로 수정이 되어야 할 건데, 표가 액박이라 봐드리지를 못하겠네요ㅠㅠ), the 35-39 and 40-44 age groups showed a similar trend.
By comparing with females and males' age at marriage, the females' age groups in 30-34, 35-39 and 40-44 went up slightly in rate, meanwhile the same age groups for males rose even more. The 35-39 category went from 7 per cent to 9 per cent and the oldest group went from 5 per cent to almost 7 per cent.
총평: 일단 빨간 부분이 거의 없는 것을 통해 볼 수 있듯이, 적어도 표현상 절대적으로 문제되는 내용들이 많지는 않은 상황입니다. 대신 표가 액박이라 제가 내용 관련해서 전혀 봐드리지 못했으므로, 수정해서 다시 올려주시면 추가적으로 내용상 보완되어야 할 점이 있는지 봐드릴게요! (아마 없을 겁니다.)
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