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<Topic> Many experts have noted that people
in modern society do not exercise often. What is a cause and solution to this problem? |
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These days, people in the world have came across
numerous changes in their daily lives for the last decades. Working out is
considered as one of those because people tend not to conduct exercise
compared to the past. Unfortunately, researchers opine that it may occur
countless drawbacks on the body condition of human beings. (시간이 부족했다면, 이 문장은 제거 1순위로 보시면 됩니다. 없어도 글이 성립하는데 아무 문제 없기 때문이죠.) In this essay, the
reasons and the measures regarding the scarcity of workout will be discussed.
One reason is developed sedentary activities. Owing to the enhanced technology, we are
able to relish countless information and entertainment programs such as
games, watching films and TV and smartphones. Nonetheless, it causes the
decrease of physical activities. The other reason can be the development of
transportation system. Due to not only the explosive growth of the number of
personal cars but also public transports such as rails, underground tubes,
buses and so forth, people do not have to walk a long distance to commute or
go to other regions. Although some researchers
Although it
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condensation, by conducting the nationwide campaign through advertisement or
broadcast, people’s cognition in terms of physical activities might be
changed. In the long term, children can be used to the workout thanks to
school exercise programs and they might thrive daily exercise even after
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