some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today's society; therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. to what extant do you agree or disagree?
There is a projection that machine based translation service will be
advanced to the level of replacing human beings, so that children would are not be required to
study foreign languages anymore. In my opinion, the development of new machine
translation will stimulate the needs studying foreign languages by expanding
the demands and corrections.
First of all, the machine
translation technology will trigger the expansion of foreign language demand.
Due to the advent of machine translation, the foreign written materials will be
circulated more actively. Thus, the total pie of foreign language demand will
be increased as the volume of foreign written materials grows. For instance, if
the new foreign novels are translated into society faster than before with the
help of a machine, the fans of foreign novels and related job opportunities will
also expand. Then, it would be a wise choice for children to learn foreign
languages to enjoy original materials or get a related job.
Secondly, (파이널님 실력이면 굳이 first of all secondly 등의 진부한 표현 없이도 글을 만드실 수 있을 겁니다.) there will be a constant need of corrections. This is because of the ‘human made’ nature that machine translation service has. As the machine itself is invented by human, there is a possibility of error and need of updating the growing development of languages by human. For example, the inventor of machine translation system who is lacking expertise in literature has risk of errors in translating poem. Likewise, newly invented words like ‘SNS’ and ‘Covid-19’ should be properly updated to the machine system by human beings. Thus, if we make our children to give up studying foreign languages, there will be no one who will carry this important and emerging job.
To conclude, expected outcomes of the advent of machine translation system are growing demand on foreign language sector and correction area rather than the decreased necessity of learning foreign languages. Thus, it is likely for the children to be faced with the stronger need to study foreign languages.
총평: (8/8/7/7) 7.5
이번 글도 잘 써주셨습니다. 파이널님의 경우 기본 영어 실력이 충분히 갖춰져있는 상황이라, 시험장에서 어버버하는 일만 없으면 7.0 정도는 충분히 받아가실 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)