Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, smartphones Smartphones and computers have commonly been used using nowadays. Compared to the past, there are is not enough opportunities for that young students to are able to develop their handwriting skills. Some some believe that making an effort to have tidy handwriting is no more essential. But (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) others believe that it still has positive aspects, having legible handwriting still has positive aspects (어순을 일부러 꼬아쓰지는 마세요~). In this essay, I will provide some information on each viewpoint and offer my perspective in this matter.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why learning how to write neatly favorable handwriting is a must especially for the youth. First and foremost, kids who have neat handwriting tend to be great at other subjects such as art and design, according to news. Moreover, clear handwriting is appreciated by teachers and other students since it is easy to read and understand. Besides this, tidy handwriting has a positive impact on grades. (이거 쓸 거면 부연설명까지 넣어주셔야 합니다. 그렇지 못할 경우 지워야 하고요. 그런데 부연설명을 넣을 시간이 없기 때문에 그냥 지우는 게 낫습니다.) Also it gives teachers and those people who read articles with well-organised handwriting good impression.
On the other hand, there are some factors explaining that we don’t (줄임말은 풀어써주세요!) need to give attention to the skills of handwriting. Initially, since the technology has been developed, in education industry in particular, utilizing digital devices is far more popular than carrying heavy books and paper. By that I mean, even adults, as well as students not only for students even adults prefer a paperless lifestyle since it brings convenience and likely improves the efficiency of study.
To sum up, even though handwriting is not considered as a huge ability in recent time since we are exposed to computers and smartphones, it is an instrument skill to have for all. It is my personal opinion that, rather than only using online tools instead of writing by hand, we should have a balance between them.
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목표: 6.5
첫 시험 날짜: 10월 29일 computer based
하루에 한번씩 들르겠습니다. 늦게 알게 된 곳이라 너무 아쉽네요... 감사합니다! 피드백 주시면 적극 반영해서 더욱 나은 글로 매일 찾아뵙겠습니다!
비밀번호: 0000
총평: (6/6/7/7) 6.5
네 치치님, 환영합니다. 일단 제일 중요한 '영어 실력' 즉 어휘+문법은 어느정도 갖춰져있는 상황입니다. 고로 남은1달 동안 글에 대한 요령만 조금 익히고, 시간 맞추는 작업만 잘 해주시면 6.5는 당연히 받으실 거고, 경우에 따라 7.0까지도 노려볼 수 있을 거에요. 여하튼 6.5는 충분히 가능하니까 어느정도 편하게 공부하셔도 될 것 같습니다.
참고로 지금은 문제가 없지만, 논제에서 To what extent~~라고 했을 때, 중립을 취하는 게 불가능한 경우도 있습니다. 그런데 학생들이 이를 100% 구별해내기 어렵기 때문에, 가급적이면 그냥 하나로 몰아주시는 걸 추천드려요. 비법노트 게시판 3페이지에 후라이드 vs 양념 이론이라는 글이 있는데, 해당 글을 읽어보시는 것도 추천드립니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)