The line graph illustrates the number of units of electricity demanded during a day in winter and summer in England. The pie chart describes what the electricity is used for in English households.
Overall, it is evident that the typical daily demand for electricity is a lot higher in winter than in summer. Moreover, more than half of the electricity is used to heat rooms and water in an average English home.
According to the line graph, the figures start at around 16,000 units in summer times and close to 35,000 units in winter times. The need for electricity in summer is quite steady throughout the day in the summer, reaching its lowest at around 7 am with approximately 13,000 units and highest at around 2-3 pm with close to 20,000 units. On the other hand, the figures in winter times fluctuate during the day and night. Electricity in winter is required the least at around 7 am at which units are about 30,000. Following that, the number of demands increases until around 10 pm, (이 쉼표는 필수입니다.) reaching approximately 48,000 units and decreases afterwards.
Regarding the pie graph, it can be guessed that electricity demands are high in winter because of the need for heating rooms and water. (맞는 말입니다. 맞는 말인데, task1에서 할 말은 아니에요. 그 어떠한 추측 등 없이 그냥 철저히 사실 자체에만 집중해주세요!) The amount of electricity used to heat rooms and water constitutes more than half of the total usage, which is 52.5%. The electricity used for washing machines and kitchen appliances such as ovens and kettles comes next, with 17.5%. It is followed by 15% of the electricity used for lighting, TV and radio and another 15% of it for vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.
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시험일 11/1, 목표점수 7
총평: (7/8/7/8) 7.5
잘 써주셨습니다. VIT님의 유일한 과제는 시간이 되겠고, 이것만 해결하면 7.5는 몰라도 목표하시는 7.0은 아무런 걱정 없을 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)