제목 : cases of stalking are increasing, and the methods of stalking are becoming more varied. What do you think are the causes for this?
How can we tackle this issue?
Nowadays, there are increasing numbers of victims who suffered from stalking by strangers, which is attributable to a variety of causes. However, these kinds of crimes could be resolved by reinforcing the law that would threaten potential criminals.
The major cause of stalking is because of the development of social media. It is axiomatic that everyone can easily access to private information of others within a short period of time by utilising people's social media. By typing the name of a names of person you want to know (글을 쓸 때 2인칭은 따로 넣지 않는다고 보시면 돼요.) on Google, almost everyone could get into others' facebook or instagram (or 를 제외한 나머지 둘은 대문자 시작해주시면 됩니다.) accounts that show photos of him or her, mobile phone numbers, and even their close friends' addresses. As these data are exposed in the Internet to anyone, criminals who are about to stalk someone could commit a crime without much an effort, by making use of it, which, as a result, resulting (맥락이 다르긴 하지만, 여하튼 앞에 같은 단어가 있으니까 대체해주세요!) in even more serious repercursions, such as murder or sexual assault.
However, reinforcing the existing laws that are related to crimes could bring about a decline rate of such crimes. It is an undeniable that the more tightened laws become on stalking, the fewer crimes will be occur. This is because stronger laws would make criminals be unwilling to do so as they do not want to face harsh consequences of their behaviours. By giving exponential amount of bail and increasing numbers of day that criminals need to spend in prison, people who are going to stalk someone could ultimately realise how serious and wrong their behaviours were, deciding to give up on their dangerous plans.
In conclusion, when all specific reasons and relevant examples are considered and evaluated, I firmly believe that cases of stalking which are caused by an easy access to personal information online through social media could be tackled when the relevant laws are strengthened than before.
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