Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern society, it is true that many plants and animals are suffering from various environmental matters. According to mass media, such as news, documentaries etc, they have warned of environmental problems. Many species have vanished over the past few years and some spices are under threat these days. For example, the glacier in the Arctic, it is melting away every year so the polar bears have no longer glacier to get on. Therefore, the polar bears are facing the extinction problem at the present.
However, I personally think that there are more significant environmental problems to solve for the future. First of all, the polluted air, soil and sea could be primary matters. These problems are caused by numerous factories and industrialisation, the more people invent products, the factories would generate more pollution and the environment will be more ill. If the environment is polluted, people will be going to encounter plenty of disadvantages, sort of a poor condition soil to cultivate crops, no more sea creatures to explore and more cases of the disease.
Second of all, the shortage of fuel can be a crucial issue for a long-term perspective of the environment. Nowadays, people are using electricity everywhere, every time and cars as well. These are significant for modern people’s daily life but after a decade or two decades, it could be struggling with shortages. The resources are limited, however, demands are increasing year by year. In addition, the crucial redevelopment of urban society has risen up for several years, to establish buildings, it has to demolish forest and cut down trees. These movements always lead to severe destruction of the environment.
In conclusion, it is a common opinion that plants and animals’ extinction is the most considerable problem for the environment. Nevertheless, I firmly think that there are other serious problems to think about the future environment.
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