The given bar chart illustrates the amount of generated and used electricity in the top ten countries for the year 2014.
Overall, it is clear that China and the US accounted for the biggest figure of electricity production and consumption. In addition, the amount of produced electricity was higher than that of consumed electricity in all countries except for Germany.
A more detailed look at the bar chart reveals that the statistics of produced electricity in China was the largest, with 5,398 billion kWh, which was similar to that of consumed electricity. This is followed by the United States, constituting 4,099 billion kWh in production. It is noticeable that the gap between production and consumption of electricity in the US was the biggest, with approximately 100 billion kWh.
With regard to the remaining countries, while Russia was the largest electricity production and consumption country, with roughly 1,000 billion kWh on average, Korea produced and used the smallest amount of electricity among countries, with nearly 450 billion kWh. Notably, the statistics of electricity consumption in Germany was slightly higher than that of production by a narrow margin of 50 billion kWh.
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