Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
this This (문장의 첫 단어는 이유불문 대문자 시작입니다. 다른데에도 싹 다 바꿔주세요!) essay will discuss whether video games are that video game is either harmless as educational device or have having side effects. i think that what game is considered to drawback is great prejudice, but contrary to what people think it brings various physical and mental benefits in many ways.
playing games help improving the power of creative and agility. for example, 'NintendoNinTenDo' which is invented in Japen company and popular game all over the world spurs user's brain. followed by study, this activity stimulates brain cells and boosts the brain to head spin faster, which can lead to improving education skills and also especially in case of using equipment, it can get keep healthy as doing activity and develops wit in required rapid judge and brings vitality to people by recharging as recharge battery in free time.
not only can it help it can helps physical capacity, but also can solve raising problem solving ability possible could happen in reality (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) . In many adventure games, facing many difficulties and it is having structures if problems were solved, you can get getting massive reward. actually, workers who has been activity several challenging situations in social will be able to solve questions rather than one who was without its activity.
so if getting patience you can overcome handicap, you can leap more results as a result for that in the future. (이 글은 patience가 핵심이 아닙니다.)
In conclusion,for the reasons mentioned previously, i think it (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰여서는 안 됩니다.) can bring physical and mentally profits through doing this in spare time.
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