Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such a common thing for us, but some people argue that they're not as good as those by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that it is more advantageous to take a class in person even if it is not doesn’t a common thing nowadays. But I completely agree with this opinion and think that it is much more important to attend a college or university in person than online programs.
There are several reasons why I believe that attending school in person is beneficial thing for us. Firstly, it is difficult for students to focus on online class to students, especially children under the secondary school. They would not won’t be care about their teacher and can’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다. 다른데에도 다 풀어주세요!) makes the interaction between teacher and pupils. For instance, the child who always take an online class can’t communicate with his or her peers. because the child have not been learn because the child has not learned how to make a relationship with friend. This way, by By attending a college or university in person, they can learn many things other than studying and it is very important to students.
Secondly, the poor feel a sense of deprivation due to the devices required for online class. Even if they have devices, other students may have more up-to-date devices and this situation leads to reduced learning efficiency. For example, countless researches show that a large number of online students are losing their grades. Thus, even though distance-learning programs are convenient convenience, it is better to attend a college or university in person.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is desirable for students to attend a college or university in person. It makes students more smart and happy.
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