The maps compare transitions of in road access to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall, it is evident that, during the a given period, the shape of the road and the location of the bus stop were changed, and also the car park was divided into two according to the purpose of the parking lot. (지도 문제의 Overview에서는 세부 변화를 다루는 것이 아닌, 이 세부 변화들이 어떠한 큰 그림으로 이어졌는지를 적어주시면 더 좋습니다.)
Looking at the map of 2007 closely, one can say that, a rectangular road named ring road (도로명은 고유명사입니다. 고로 대문자 시작이에요. 근데 다른데에는 잘 해주신 거 보니까 여기만 실수인듯 하네요.) that connects with the Hospital Road surrounded the City Hospital (얘는 고유명사 아닙니다.). There was a car park available for staff and public at the southeast of the road. There were bus stops on both sides of the Hospital Road, which borders the City Road.
As for the changes of the following three years, roads at the junction of each road were turned to the roundabout shape (그냥 roundabout이 추가되었다고 해주시면 됩니다.), and a new bus stop was built on the west side of the changed roads. In addition, the car park was divided respectively for staff and public; the, whose original location was used for staff, and a new parking lot for the public was built on the east side of Ring Road.
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