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Dear
Sir or Madam,
I am
a student studying at RMIT, where I have been for the last three years, and I am writing
this letter to report the current issue of our school cafeteria.
First
of all, I would like to mention that I enjoy having my lunch at the school
cafeteria, because the location is very convenient and the atmosphere is also
really comfortable. However, I have recently experienced some inconveniences
when I was searching for a table to use. As the new semester has started a week ago, it is
almost impossible to find a table during peak time. Also, students often leave
rubbish everywhere in the cafeteria, as there are not enough rubbish bins
allocated.
To
improve the cafeteria, I believe the place should utilize more tables and
relocate them properly in order to accommodate more students at lunch time. On
top of that, if the school can offer a few more rubbish bins in the cafeteria area,
we would be able to enjoy the facility in a the cleaner environment.
I am
looking forward to seeing any improvement in our school cafeteria soon.
Yours sincerely,
Kate
Kim
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