<Topic> You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. |
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Some people insist that only talented person can survive in specific field like art and sport. Other people argue that any people can success as an artist or athlete with practice or effort. This essay will stand on the first argument and specify the reasons. In talent-oriented point of view, the natural talent is very important in art and sport. The natural sense of art and body structure is crucial for real. For instance, when children start ballet, the shape of toes and overall body shape is important. Even if they do their best, ballet is a hard field without basic condition of body. Without this physical condition, the children get exhausted soon and sometimes practicing motion would be hurts. However, there are winners who overcome the natural condition like a Ji-sung Park. He is the typical person tried to impossible thing to participate in international soccer game with flat foot. In fact, there are some people who’s effort overweight origin talent. Practicing 10 hours or more in everyday, they experienced success even with natural disorders. However, most people give up the process of “grind or die” because it costs a lot of money in the field such as art and sport. In conclusion, natural talent is more important than practicing to be an athlete or artist. The given condition from parents is necessary in these fields because it is hard to overcome the physical condition with practicing. The sports and arts are selective part that is not achieved by anybody. |
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