The environment is changing rapidly because humans are destroying nature to meet their needs.
Discuss this cause of environmental change and suggest some solutions for this problem.
Many experts have become concerned because the nature has been destroyed days by days. Nowadays, human uses resources of earth aggressively trying to dominate them. In response to this problem, most of all, people should change their thoughts on nature. Also, the changed mind should be linked to their pattern of consumption.
Firstly, people are using the environment carelessly for their needs. Even many experts warn that this destroy affects to human life, there is little change for earth’s environment. As people keep cutting off trees in rainforests, many places already start to become deserts. For instance, Amazon, where people used to call as a lung of earth, is losing its function because of human’s desire for their convenience. It clearly shows that human uses resource of earth regardless of nature’s damage.
To stop this problem, people have to change their perception about the relation between human and the earth. As people is affected by the environmental change, people should believe that human is a part of the earth, not a dominator. Also, this thought has to be continued to the behavior of consumption. For example, the consumers need to pay more attention on the products made ecofriendly than other products. It illustrates that the change of thinking of individuals can be a starting point for the conservation of nature.
To summarize, although the nature’s damage because of human needs is a serious issue, it is clear that there is a solution to fix this problem. If people believe the earth as a place to live, this issue will soon be a problem of a past.
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