Many people believe that getting their own home is important rather than renting an apartment or flat for some reasons.
Why the people think ownership of home is important?
First above all, some people don’t want to
move after their contract being expired because they have make a lot of efforts
to find another rental houses which are so tiring and burden.
Secondly, people who try to buy their own
house tend to think that buying houses is kind of investment. Those people believe
that if they buy an apartment or a flat which is located near the downtown, the
values of the house will increase so that they can make a great amount of
money.
However, I think the preference towards buying
a home is a huge problem these days for several reasons.
Firstly, it can cause bubble economy. For
example, many people in South Korea want to buy their own house because of purpose
of investment. As the demand of houses grows, the value of the apartments
increased even if the houses are not that good to live.
Secondly, it would be impossible to poor
people to find their accommodation. If everyone want to buy the houses, just few
houses will be available to rent so that the rental fee must incline.
Last but not least, people would
discriminate the people who don’t have their own house because they think those
kind of people is poor and have low economic status. Even young children who
have rich parents will bully the poor students
For those reasons, I strongly believe that governments
have to set proper schemes and laws to solve this situation. If the more people
rent house rather than buying it, the more people would become happy.
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