The chart gives information concerning the trend in people moving from rural to cities in Iran, Indonesia and Russia and projections in the near future. Overall, it is seen that Iranians and Russians experienced the fastest growth pattern between 2000 and 2020. Meanwhile, the number of Indonesians increased gradually.
At the beginning of the period, Russians
moved the most from the countryside to the cities among the three countries. The
figure was approximately 10.5 million. In contrast, the figures of Iranians and Indonesians
were about 8 million and 10 million, respectively. Between 2005 and 2010, the
number of Iranians who moved from the rural to the urban territories increased
abruptly, while but a small number of Indonesians moved from the country to the urban
regions. These figures were about 35 million and 20 million, respectively.
There is an interesting difference between 2010 and 2015. During this time, the number of Russians who moved the rural to the urban areas skyrocketed from 40 million to 70 million. In contrast, only about 5 million of Indonesians went to the cities. In the near future, the number of people living in Iran is expected to go beyond Russia’s figure for the first time after 2020. As a result, both of these anticipated figures are a value of 80 million in 2020. On the other hand, the number of Indonesians who will move their places to the urban areas is likely to stabilize at about 30% (안 틀리면 더 좋겠지만, 이런 거 한 번 틀린다고 갑자기 폭풍감점되지는 않습니다.).
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1. 6.5 점이 목표입니다
2. 60분 타이머제고 테스크 1이랑 2 다쓰려고 노렸했어요. 분량 조절 실패로 1분 정도 시간 오바 났습니다 ㅠ 다음엔 60분안에 작성하도록 노력하겠습니다!
3.10월 10일 시험입니다!
총평: (7/7/6/6) 6.5
잘 써주셨습니다. 양산님 실력에 s를 안 붙이신 점이 조금 의외이긴 한데, 여하튼 6.5는 충분히 받고도 남아요. 문장 구조가 약간은 제한적인 점 역시 아쉬우나, 이는 7점 이상에서의 문제입니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)