1. 라이팅에서의 목표점수: 6.5
2. 다음시험 날짜 그리고 위의 점수를 아무리 늦어도 언제까지는 만들어야 하는지: 최소 2021년 8월
3. 현재 글을 쓰는데에 몇분이 걸렸는지 + 단어수 + 외부도움: 19분 +175단어 + 외부도움X
4. 그 외 제가 알아두면 도움될만한 기타 정보나 현재 학생 여러분들의 공부상황: 영국대학 오퍼를 받았고 아이엘츠 제출을 위해 군대에서 독학중입니다 감사합니다
+++++ 10월 24일 쯤 첫 아이엘츠 응시를 하려는데 라이팅 6.0 나올 수 있을지 모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ
My answer
There are two different maps illustrate the road which play a significant role as a connector to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. At first, Ring Road, City Road, and City Hospital in 2010 are placed in the same position compared to the map in 2007. In general, Staff car park is still positioned right side of Hospital Rd both 2007 and 2010, but the place of Public car park in 2010 placed in the east part of Ring Road compared to 2007.
First of all, roundabout is newly appeared to the map in 2010. This being so, there is no more bus stop in 2010, and Bus station which is easily connected to the roundabout is freshly created in 2010. Moreover, Staff car park and Public car park was in the same place in 2007, but they are not in the same point anymore in 2010. place of Staff car park has remained since 2007, but the Public car park is newly placed to the east side of Ring Road in 2010.