The two maps illustrate the changes around Olive Drive from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, it is clear that there are several changes on both sides of Olive Drive between 1980 and 2010. Many facilities and buildings were constructed for educational, commercial, and residential purposes.
Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that five houses were added in 1980 were added as ten houses in the year 2010, showing a total sum of ten houses. Housing units were built near the park located in the northwest side of Olive Drive and a new school was constructed on the east side of the residential area. Moreover, many small shops located in the south west of Olive Drive were replaced by a large shopping centre Centre and a supermarket. The community centre Centre was reduced in space to make room space for the bank, which was moved to an area behind community centre Centre. The former bank space of the bank was taken built by a café. In addition, the hospital next to the community centre Centre and the bank remained unchanged from 1980 to 2010.
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