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Recently, the issue of only (일단은 기존 문장을 깨지 않으려고 이렇게 바꿔드렸는데, 사실 SS님 실력이면 다른 구조를 사용해서 이것보다 조금 더 자연스러운 문장을 만드실 수 있지 않을까 싶습니다.) a small number of locals entering historical facilities has become the subject of heated debate. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, such as entrance fees, and various measures could be taken to alleviate this issue, including launching a campaign. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for this undesirable trend and present some solutions to the problem.
There do seem to be numerous causes underlying this phenomenon. Perhaps the most oft-cited cause is that the majority of local governments have a tendency to only focus on travellers (타지에서 온~이라고 수식해주시면 조금 더 좋을 것 같긴 한데, 여행자에 어느정도 그러한 의미가 있기 때문에 필수는 아닙니다.) when they promote local attractions. This is partly because governments in local areas are obsessed with attracting visitors from other cities or nations who are more likely to expend a great deal of money on other industries in local areas, which can invigorate economic growth. Another fundamental cause is that the majority of citizens consider paying the same amount of money for entrance to local sites to be unfair, compared to travellers given that they spend a vast sum of money on tax money in order to support local governments.
There are, however, several courses of action that local governments as well as historical amenities could take to address the root cause of the problem. The most practical solution to this problem is a local government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could notify the fact that a multitude of local facilities have difficulty attracting locals to them (굳이 안 쓰셔도 됩니다. 써도 손해보는 건 없고요.)and hopefully, raise awareness amongst local residents. For example, the city government of Daejeon located in the middle of South Korea recently recommended their citizens to visit local facilities and this resulted in a dramatic increase in the number of residents visiting historical sites in Daejeon. (얘의 경우 앞에서 했던 말에 고유명사만 붙여서 반복하는 것에 지나지 않습니다.) A second feasible solution would be for local facilities to charge inhabitants less for admission to these amenities, leading to a growth in the number of local visitors.
In conclusion, the aforementioned problems have resulted from various causes suggested above and can be tackled with various steps. If every sector of our society makes a concerted effort, we can combat the problems. | | | | | |
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