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Dear Mr Smith,
I am a student studying for a Master’s degree in Electronic
Engineering, at RMIT, in Melbourne, where I have been stayed for last 2 years.
I am currently looking for a part-job, which I can work
along with my study. As an engineering student, I have deep knowledge on
electronics, therefore, I wish to have working experience in job fields related
to my major. Also, it would be great, if the position offers around 20 hours of
working time weekly, as I need to study and work together. 단순히 전공을 살릴 수 있는 직업이면 좋겠다고만 쓰기보다는 특정 예를 들어도 좋을 것 같아요.
I am originally from South Korea, and achieved my Bachelor’s
degree from KAIST, where which is famous for providing practical skills to their
students. During my study, I was able to develop circuit design skills,
especially in computer memory technology. This means that I am fully
experienced using a number of software, such as Cadence, PSpice, and Labview.
On top of that, I do have three months of internship experience in IBM, USA,
during the last semester.
Please advise me any job positions that seem suitable for
me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Kate Kim
IELTS 1-9 score scale score: 9 expert user
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