Some people say that the main environmental problem of out time is the loss of particular species of platns and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that people has tendancy to consider environmental problems as like air, fine dust, water shortage, etc more than the loss of particular species of platns and animals. However, It is evident that the most serious issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.
Air pollution is rising environmental trend, not only Korea, but also all over the world. This stronly connects our health and everybody is impacted on inevitably evertime, everywhere. For instance, research has shown that fine dust which is blown away from North-West side makes people allergic for bodies. This reaction might leads to serious disease.
Nethertheless, I support the idea that the main environmental problem is the loss of particular species of plant sand animals. Food chain consists of 5steps. The bottom line is made of mineral, inorganic matter. Second line's members can only eat mineral, plant that is right under second level. As like this, All the food chain is well organized and if some of species is distincts, this system will be not functioned well. Take example of Africa, elephants shot by gun mans are getting increasing and this follow distinction of predators which eat the elephants. Undoubtedly, people are the 1st predators this food chain, it can leads to food shortage.
To sum up, it is apparent that other issues should be considered as serious problems, it is undeniable that lossing some of species and animals can cause distinct of humans.
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