You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, most of the schoolgirl tend to study arts mainly unlike male students who study science. There are some reasons for these phenomena and I opine that these phenomena will be changed soon.
To begin with, some people say that there is prime reason for schoolgirls tend to study the art subject rather than science. First of all, most people are conservative and for this reason, men emphasize femininity to women and also women think that science and math are is not feminine. To be specific, the person gender identity is determined between the age of six and fifteen and adults force their children to do different things depending on sex dut to, students think that regardless of their will the women should study are and men should study subjects such as logical science.
However, recently a lot of schoolgirls begin to take an interest in scientific study. Fist and foremost, unlike in the past as the internet advances in modern society girls can access science more easily. For example, YouTube and national geographic channel there are a lot of interesting videos about introducing the science in this progress girls have a curiosity about the science and the quality of the video is getting higher thus, girls have comfortable access to science
As it has been demonstrated, in modern society conservative social trends still remain thus, women tend to choose to learn the art rather than science. However, recently schoolgirls began to be interested in science because of YouTube and other interesting videos. For these reasons, I believe that women learn science and it will have a positive effect on society.
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PS.
1. 논제에서 "girls tend to choose arts while boys like science" 이 부분을 보면 여성들은 예술을 고르고, 남성들은 과학을 좋아한다 라고 말하고 있는데, 이 choose 해석을 여성들이 수동적으로 arts 를 배운다고 해석해도 되는건가요? like 는 능동적으로 뭔가 좋아한다 라는것 이라는 것을 알겠는데. 이 문장에서 chosen 이라고 아에 대놓고 선택되어 지다 라고 말하지 않고 choose 라고는 하지만 뭔가 느낌이 달라서요...
2. 문제에서 girls 라고 물어보는데 글을 작성할때 women, schoolgirl 이라고 써도 감점처리는 따로 당하지 않나요?