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Today, some urgent environmental problems are caused by gas and oil consumption. In this regard, it is often argued that all countries (이거랑, 논제의 international community는 조금 다릅니다. 전자는 국가 개개에 가깝고, 후자는 국가들이 힘을 합해서 활동하는 쪽으로 보시면 됩니다.) should take action to reduce it. I also agree with this opinion and will discuss the reasons in this essay.
Actually, the main causal factors for global warming nowadays are oil and gas that have to be burnt for living. For example, mass transportation relies on them to transfer commuters on a daily basis, and the development of it is proceeding without not much consideration on harmful effects of its fuels. If this change continues, the transportation systems will be useless again.
Also, the consumption of fossil fuel is often made faster than the production and supplying, and this can be a problem in the near future. There are only a few countries that have the resources and able to supply all over the world. However, they might not be able to do so if the world consumes fuels at this pace. At this point, the participation of all nations (여기도 international community라고 적어주시는 게 더 정확하긴 합니다.) to slower it down will be encouraging.
In conclusion, every countries should gather and act internationally (대신 이렇게 구체적으로 작성하면 괜찮고요.) and immediately to make less consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. This is because they are being used in many ways and rapidly so more solutions from different sides of the world are necessary. |