The pie chart shows the amount of money that a
children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
The two charts indicate the percentage
of budget that a children’s charity in the USA used and earned in 2016.
Overall, the income in 2016 was slightly bigger than the expenditures, showing
that the biggest resources was the food donated by a substantial number of
people and the most spending was program services for the children’s benefit. (showing 이하는 사실 그냥 새로운 문장으로 넣는 게 낫습니다. rainv님 실력이면 알아서 잘 바꾸실 수 있을 거라 따로 건드리지는 않았어요. 가급적이면 한 문장에는 하나의 내용만 오도록 맞춰주세요!)
As clearly seen from the first chart regarding receiving resources,
86.6% of total income was from a donated food, followed by community contributions
and program revenue with the figure of 10.4% and 2.2% respectively. There were
other routes of income such as government grants and investment income, but the total figures were less than 0.5%. In
spending chart, the biggest portion was the program services which were accounted
for 95.8% and fundraising and management and general showed 2.6% and 1.6%
respectively. (이 문단에서 total 돈도 같이 적어주시면 됩니다.)
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
잘 써주셨습니다. 물론, 실전에서 표가 이렇게 쉽게 출제될 확률은 0%입니다.(표가 쉬우면 학생들이 쓰기도 어렵지만, 채점관들에게도 채점이 어려워져요.) 여하튼 크게 문제는 없었고, Overview에서 문장이 너무 길어지는 일만 없게 신경써주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)