The line graph below shows changes
in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975
to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the consumption of different types of amount and type of fast food by Australian teenagers between 1975 to 2000.
Overall, it is clear that there is an opposite
trend during the given years in the category of fish and chips which dropped unlike
other kinds of fast food, that showed a general increase.
In detail, in 1975, Australian teenagers consumed
fish ad chips the most which accounted for about 100 times but after 10 years,
the popularity fluctuated approximately between 83 and 97 times. Over the 15-year
period, there was a steep decline to slightly down 40 times because they had not eaten chose fish and chips as much as before.
Meanwhile, hamburger and pizza that recorded
merely 10 times by 1975 started to climb dramatically in its consumption. In 1985, the consumption
overtook the number of fish and chips and in the next five years, fish and chips which showed the highest numbers the fast food which
was the best one in the given first year was reversed by pizza respectively in
about 83 and 63 times.
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