Some people think that the effective way to reduce pollution is to tax the companies which cause it. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, innumerable meteorologists and environmentalists assert that firms that emit many pollutants should pay a tax to solve pollution issues. I completely disagree with this statement since I believe that there will be more effective ways.
On the one hand, there are two reasons why some individuals
argue that corporations ought to pay a tax to relieve pollution. From a people’s
point of view, they tend to trust something shown superficially or visually. For
instance, if those who are not interested in caring environmental issue see a
plant, they are likely to believe that that is the main cause of contamination.
In relation to this, in the last decade, various media often have broadcast
that pilot plants which giants are managing is the main reason of global
warming. For this reason, people are prone to think that companies need to pay
a tax.
On the other hand, although all governments already receive
a lot of money in tax from many behemoths, countries around the world have not yet been able to solve solved pollution issues. For this reason, I believe that there are more
efficient measures. First of all, we can vote for politicians who propose
actively to tackle pollution and enforce a new law that constricts haphazard
use of the disposable products. Moreover, governments need to create a campaign
that can help to change people’s stereotypes concerning pollution and wrong
behavior that could accelerate global warming.
To wrap it all up, although people would claim that companies should pay a tax to deal with contamination issues, I believe that there are much greater measures that can aid to solve pollution.
1. 6.5 점이 목표입니다
2. 267자입니다 10월 10일날 시험입니다. 11월 까지는 만들고 싶습니다. -> 11월까지 갈 거 없습니다. 다른 영역은 모르겠는데 적어도 라이팅은 무조건 10월 10일 졸업입니다. 그 뒤는 생각하지 마세요!
3. task1 2 60분 타이머재고 풀었습니다. 59분 30초정도 걸린거 같습니다.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
잘 써주셨습니다. 6.5는 당연히 넘기고, 7.0도 충분히 괜찮을 거에요. 양산님의 경우는 task1에 따라 최종 점수가 갈릴 겁니다. 여기서 어느정도 선방하면 7.0이고, 만약에 조~금 아쉽다 싶으면 6.5일 겁니다. task2는 전혀 걱정 없습니다. 시험장에서 중간에 쓰러지는 일만 없으면 돼요.
수고하셨습니다 :)