These
diagrams represent two different rooms which can contain a maximum of 8 and 10 people respectively 8 people and maximum
10 people each.
Overall, the
two places have a similarity in that they both have bookshelves, table, coffee
machine, and desks. However, desks of the room B were all gathered together,
whereas those of the room A are
separated into two parts. Moreover, organization of other stuffs (구어에 해당하므로 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다. sb님 정도 실력이면 충분히 좋은 대체제를 찾을 수 있을 거에요.) is different
between these two places.
Looking at
the diagrams more closely, bookshelves are (여기에 전치사 하나가 들어가야 합니다.) upper left side of the Room A, while
they are on the lower right corner of the room B. As for coffee machine, it is
down below of the room A, whereas it is upper right side of the room B. As I (task 1에서는 1인칭을 쓸 이유도, 필요도 없습니다.)
mentioned above, desks are divided into two groups in the room A. However, in
case of the room B, they are all together. Last, as the table can be placed in the
middle of the room A because desks are on the left and right sides. But (문장을 and but so로 시작해서는 안 됩니다.), table
in the room B must be between desks and bookshelves.
총평: (7/6/6/6) 6.5
sb님도 다른 수험생들과 마찬가지로 task2에 비해 task1이 다소 아쉬운 상황입니다. 그러나 task1은 모범답안 분석이 충분히 빛을 발하는 영역이므로, 꼭 여러 모범답안을 보시고 사용할 수 있는 표현과 문장구조 등을 따로 정리해보세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)